Prologue P.5

28.9.2012

Prologue P.5
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ranger_brianna_new on 11.11.2012

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I think you meant "had never been in". And I'm not sure if you wanted port or part; I can see either working, but what seems to be more natural to my mind is part.

Jass Befrold on 11.11.2012

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Thank a lot to telling me! I didn't saw that (probably too tired), I'll fix that any time soon :]

Edit: Fixed now =D

HabilisOrian on 25.11.2012

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The lighting in the last panel is fantastic. I'm guessing this temple is incredibly HUGE and old, since she mentions "I went to a part of the temple I had never been in".

Jass Befrold on 25.11.2012

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True, first time she going to see that :]
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